My name is Renee and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey Team. Ka pai on your work on this comic strip. I really appreciate how you looked at the facial expressions of the men in the photographs and crafted the dialogue between them to match. I also liked how you used humor in your comic, this made it really memorable and enjoyable to read. Did you enjoy making this comic strip? Have you been fishing before?
Ngā mihi nui and keep up the excellent mahi - I can’t wait to see your other posts over the summer!
Kia ora David
ReplyDeleteMy name is Renee and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey Team. Ka pai on your work on this comic strip. I really appreciate how you looked at the facial expressions of the men in the photographs and crafted the dialogue between them to match. I also liked how you used humor in your comic, this made it really memorable and enjoyable to read. Did you enjoy making this comic strip? Have you been fishing before?
Ngā mihi nui and keep up the excellent mahi - I can’t wait to see your other posts over the summer!
Renee (SLJ)
Talofa Lava david
ReplyDeleteI liked reading your blog post it was very interesting Why did you just write laugh instead you could write ha ha